Sela Locke

I'm sorry. I tried to go on Microsoft Word to edit this, to make it slightly less... -gurgle- but I couldn't. I couldn't pretend to be an unpopular girl in ...

I'm going to be really, really straight with you, so if you only like the kind of reviews that compliment and nitpick, hide! There are things you can rush, that ...

Hel- lo . My name is Sela Locke and I will be your -- oh, I hate saying that. Hi. Call me Sela, won't you? (Nitpicks first!) "How are you, ...

No matter what anyone else says, I really liked the way you did this. This chapter, I mean. -awkwardcough- Hehe. Yes, I'm back, and yes, I very much like you ...

It would make me feel stupid to say, 'OMG! I really like this!' So I'll just pretend I did and move on. I can't say, in all honesty, that I ...

I like coconuts. Do you like coconuts? Ermmm, sozzies. Anyways, thanks for the PM. Here I go! Isaac looked amused. “Hi to you too.” There was a wryly amused note ...

You can't beat Nu. Then again, you Nu beat can't. So there you have it. I read this on Facebook and I hear I died. Had a weird seizure and ...

Ian I sat in the very back row of the church. It had only been days since I last saw Kali. I tried to block that memory from my mind. ...

The review below is rated as the story should be - PG-13. Just thought I'd let everyone know. ;-D - You have pretty good grammar, and only a few typos ...

Heyyy, Ash! Backbackback again! As usual, nitpicks d'abord ! immense change that overtook her. Her hair had taken Repetition of take . Change taken to acquired or attained or gained ...

Here we go! Nitpicks fiiiirsst. It was as though I had entered a world in absence of light. Wrong way to say it. It was as if I had entered ...

Perfection. To more amateur writers like us, it merely means a total lack of humanity and description to our characters. Perhaps if one of the classical authors created a perfect ...

W-w-w-well, I return in a flash of glorious white light, if you don't mind, Ash dear. We writers really do have a flair for the dramatic, don't we? Arrrrhrrhmm! I'd ...

Your dad reads your stories? That's cool. Mine'd have to rip my Mac from my hands to read any of my stuff -- not that he would. xD Er, anyways, ...

Well, here I am again. I suppose I was rather harsh last time I reviewed, and for that, well, I apologize. It's perfectly beastly, having someone continuously beat your story ...